Overall, I love this series. I wouldn't be writing these
retrospectives if I didn't. However, I don't like this book. It is by far my
least favorite of the series and I was so upset by the book when it came out
that I nearly quit reading the series. The last of what I call the "Wandering
Trilogy," there are only a few interesting events in the latter half of the book
and the best thing about it is that it leads into the home stretch and things
get much better from here on out.
I don't want
to be too negative in this post, but there are a few items I need to get off my
chest. If you happen to really like this book for whatever reason, you won't
miss much by skipping this post.
Anyway,
imagine you were like me in 2003, that you had been reading the series for over
10 years at this point and had stuck with it, even though the books had gotten
shorter, the story had slowed down quite a bit, there did not seem to be an end
in sight and people were really criticizing Jordan for dragging things out and
"milking" the series. I was starting to fear that now it would shift to 3 years
between each, although technically the wait for this was only a little over 2
years (Nov 2000 – Jan 2003). It felt like 3, though. A lot went on in my life
during those years and I forgot about The Wheel of Time for a
while.
Before you continue:
- This is part 10 of my The Wheel of Time retrospective
- See this blog post for an overview of the retrospective
- These blogs are most effective with your own re-read of the series
- Warning: CONTAINS SPOILERS FOR THE ENTIRE SERIES
Nebraska to Illinois to
Virginia
I moved from Omaha, NE to Chicago, IL
in 2001, to play drums for a fairly well-known death metal band called Broken
Hope. You can find out more about my musical ventures on the Music page. Anyway, they were already established and needed a drummer for a
European tour. I had been in the underground scene for a number of years with my
Omaha-based band, Lead, and jumped at the chance, already being familiar
with much of their material. Lead had pretty much broken up by that
point, anyway, so after the tour I relocated to Chicago to help with a new
Broken Hope album.
Things in Broken Hope fell apart
later that year. I remained in Chicago until 2002, working the night shift in an
ER downtown, doing a lot of reading and writing in my spare time, and finally
tired of being alone in the city, decided to move to northern Virginia, where
all of my immediate family was residing. I stopped the music thing for a while,
did more writing, found a new job and got settled.
Thoughts Then
Then I found out the
next book was finally coming out. Finally. I wasn't that excited for it,
and I was a bit leery after the last couple, but I was still willing to give it
a try. Third time's the charm, right? I only re-read Winter's Heart to
prep for this one, and ultimately it was unnecessary. There was another
pre-release of an eBook prologue, which I skipped. I don't remember buying the
book, but as usual, the first thing I did was check the number of chapters and
was immediately disappointed by only 30. Given the scope of the story, I just
didn't feel 30 chapters per book was really enough to sate my appetite anymore
or justify the long wait. I wanted it to be back in the 50 range like it was in
the beginning.
I did some quick skimming of
chapter titles and icons, noted new icons, but I wasn't feeling too good about
this one. I started reading, and close to halfway through the book I realized
that not much was going to happen, and that I had been shafted again. I'd been
waiting over two years for this? I was excited to see how people would
react to saidin being cleansed. But we get virtually none of that and it
was a huge letdown. Rand and Logain meet and there's no mention of it at all. So
after the previous two and giving Jordan a third chance to get the story moving
again, this was too much.
I was very upset and
disappointed. Though there is some decent material in the last third of the book, it
was all I could do to finish it, and I felt like my support of the series book
after book didn't matter to Jordan. It was a complete slap in the face to me.
How could he let us down like this? Did he seriously think we enjoyed reading
about what everyone in the Rebel Hall of the Tower is wearing? I know I
shouldn't be lumping those who like this book in with me, but I think we can all
agree that the majority of long-time WoT readers were displeased with this book when it
first came out (and still are). I even wrote an extremely scathing review of it
on Amazon, but I've since removed it as I don't feel that strongly about it
anymore. I vowed not to read Jordan anymore until the series was finished, and I
stopped recommending the series to friends.
Obviously, not reading it anymore didn't happen. More on that in the post for Knife of Dreams.
Thoughts Now
I still
don't like this book. This is only my third time reading it, and I got bogged
down in the first half once again. It's plain boring to me. Too much description
and rehashing of the "rules of the world." By Book 10 we know how the world
works, Jordan, there's no need to go over the same details and background every
book. It drives me nuts and I skim a lot on those sections.
Important events here are given little screen time. The first
meeting between Rand and Logain—something we've been waiting for for years—is
only three pages. Egwene sneaking out to sabotage the harbor chains in Tar Valon
is only two pages. Yet we spend longer detailing what the Rebel Hall of the
Tower is wearing. It takes longer to explain how Elayne takes a bath. As a
reader, it's frustrating to read. As a writer myself, I don't particularly
understand the rationale behind writing the book this way. We love the detail, Jordan, but not that kind of detail.
Honestly, the storyline of Elayne claiming the Lion Throne is way
too long and is as interesting as watching paint dry. Knowing how it turns out,
we now know it's not vitally important to Tarmon Gai'don itself, and is a lot of
wasted words. My eyes glaze over when I read the Elayne chapters in this book. I
could dedicate an entire blog post to how pointless some of the Elayne material
is, but I'd probably bore myself with it.
Given
that—and many other reasons—it's the only book in the series I have trouble
reading. I've only quit one book in my life without finishing (Ulysses by
James Joyce), so I don't quit easily, and I've read a lot of books. I really
struggle with this one, though. The new appreciation I have for the previous two
books that the years and multiple re-reads has brought me doesn't extend to this
book. Only my love for the series and the promised ending keeps me going. I
firmly believe that half of this book is unnecessary and it could have easily
been combined with Winter's Heart, leading right into Knife of
Dreams.
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| And on Amazon, they still don't like it... |
The fact that it's still only 2 stars on Amazon after 2400+ reviews
is telling. Yes, we all know the Internet is made for complainers, and haters
gonna hate, and there are a lot more reviews for this volume than others in the
series, but usually if a book is good enough and there are enough votes, the
"crap" votes don't factor into the overall rating as much. But it's still at 2
stars. I've rarely come across a 2-star book—and a NYT #1 Bestseller to
boot—with that many ratings.
If I ever re-read
the series again—which won't happen for a long while—I'm going to skip this
book. Really. If you feel you must read it, I recommend you read the prologue,
skip the first 15 chapters and read the encyclopaedia-wot.org summaries instead,
then start at Chapter 16, which picks up from after the
Cleansing.
The Failed
Structure
Jordan has admitted that the
structure of this book didn't work out the way he
had hoped. Showing what everyone else was
doing while Rand was cleansing saidin sounds like a good idea... but
there's a problem with that. The problem is three-fold: 1) we already know that
none of the others do anything in regards to the Cleansing since they didn't
appear during the ending of Winter's Heart, 2) they don't do anything
worth reading about while the Cleansing is occurring and 3) it takes too damn
long to read about how they are doing nothing.
This is really the only part of the series where I question events.
As cool as the Cleansing sequence was, the fact that no one else in the world
aside from the Forsaken did anything about it has never sat right with me.
Everyone stares off towards the massive beacon of the One Power, but they just
shrug and are like, "Rand's doing something important, none of our business."
That has always struck me as rather odd. The behavior of the Aes Sedai are
understandable, given that they are weak, confused and generally scared of the
Forsaken by this point.
It takes 15 chapters to
give us an update on Mat, Perrin and Elayne up to and during the Cleansing. Mat
gets ready to leave the Ebou Dar area, even though we thought he had left in the
last book. Perrin chases the Shaido and finds them in the city of Malden. Elayne
is still trying to claim the Lion Throne, everyone just chilling in
Caemlyn.
There, I've just given you a summary
of half of the book in three sentences. That could be a single one-hour episode
of a TV show. Seriously.
Mat and
Tuon
Now to talk about something
good.
The best part about this book, by far, is
the "courtship" of Tuon by Mat, even though it only spanned a couple of
chapters. Back in Book 4, The Shadow Rising, when we learned Mat was
fated to marry the Daughter of the Nine Moons, to me it was something cool, but
I didn't know that it was related to the Seanchan for a few books, then I
sat around for years waiting for this character to show up. And when Tuon
finally does in Book 9, I thought, "how in the world are they going to marry
each other?" They are like night and day, and she is not his type at all (as Mat
frequently reminds the reader).
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| Credit to Abigail Goldsmith... see the rest here. |
But Jordan surprised me and pulls it off. I didn't think at first
that it would just be a marriage of "convenience," like that among royalty, but
it makes perfect sense. Mat starts the marriage ceremony by mistake, and he
chases after her because he knows he has to... and eventually realizes that it
could be a good thing to be a Seanchan Prince, come Tarmon Gai'don with the
whole of the invading Seanchan army there to be used.
Very cleverly done by Jordan, I only wish there had been more of it
in this book. It doesn't redeem the book as a whole, but it's worth
mentioning.
The Wandering Covers
To
go along with my concept of the "Wandering Trilogy," comprised of Books 8-10,
are the covers to these same books. They each show one of the three
ta'veren—Rand, Perrin and Mat—wandering somewhere with a bunch of people
following behind them. I didn't notice this pattern when they first came out,
but looking at them now, I wonder if it was a conscious effort on Sweet's or
Tor's part to do the same cover three times in a row to reflect the crawling
pace of the series.
It's quite fitting, in a way. And though
I've said many times that I hate the Sweet covers, these three are the only
decent ones, with the cover for The Path of Daggers being my favorite,
as I mentioned
previously.
Something else that ties these three books together—they all end
with a kidnapping. Faile in Book 8, Tuon in Book 9 and Egwene in Book
10.
The End of Epic
Investments
A side effect of the publication of
this book is that I stopped getting invested in unfinished epic series. I used
to read a lot of series when they first came out and followed many as each book
came out, but based on my experience with WoT by 2003 and having to wait so
long, I stopped doing that.
I waited until the
last Harry Potter book was out before reading anything in that series. [Update 7/4/2020: Fantastic series, really impressed by how Rowling maintained quality and delivered in a timely fashion with so much attention and pressure on her.]
I
was already reading A Song of Ice and Fire at this point (started in
2001), but after being disappointed with Book 4 and waiting six years for the
next volume, I've put that one on hold for now. I'll probably wait until it's
done before picking it up again. [Update 7/4/2020: I did read Book 5, but after the way the Game of Thrones TV show ended and the fact that 9 years later the next book is still not out, I've lost interest in the series.]
I didn't
bother to try The Malazan Book of the Fallen until learning the last book
would soon be out. [Update 7/4/2020: Gave up after Book 6, so many issues with this one.]
I bought Brandon Sanderson's The Way of Kings for him
to sign on the Towers of Midnight tour, but I have no plans to read it
any time soon, given that the series is planned for 10 books. [Update 7/4/2020: 8 years later, only 3 books are out... I'll check back in 2030 and see where he is.]
